Okay, so I'm currently writing a novella (one of my manifestations in progress) a nice little work of fiction, and I'm about halfway through. I'd just like some feedback, though, because I mean, hey, it's just me working on it, thinking it through. So, if anyone is willing to review or give a little critique on this piece of fiction, I'd greatly appreciate it. As a warning, it is erotic, just so you know.
Feedback like: whether or not its long enough, perhaps the plot/specific scenes needs strengthening, where I could elaborate/add some scenes, and, of course your general opinion is pretty much ideal. I do know where I want to go with it, but more than one mind is better ;)
I'd like maybe 2-3 people to review, so if you're interested, just PM me with your email address.
Thanks a lot guys. Happy cocreating!